EYELIDS
- tenbrunsel2
- Apr 26
- 2 min read
Updated: Apr 29

Caption: “HELLO! Helloooooo down there!”
I had closed my eyes on the couch
One cozy afternoon
Amazed
At what was projected on back of my eyelids
At first
A small upside down evergreen tree-like shape
Like a small someday
Christmas Tree
Dazzling young and old
Yet looking closer . . . Even closer
Hum? Those aren’t
Limbs and foliage but a mass of
Tiny tiny dots
Jillions of them
Honeybees
Clustered around their rogue Queen
searching out a new home
WOW! Where’d that image come from?
I close my eyes again
And this time
On the sightless darkened lid-screen
This time - Notes a vast array posted notes and printed
Paperwork posted all over halls and walls
Photos, numbers, figures,
Typed and hand written
At least thirty or fifty or so plastered
Everwhere on the back of my eyelids
It was more real than a hallucination
I could see them clearly, even tried to read some
But couldn't make out the words for figures
Strange and amazing
Intrigued by what appears there
What a magical display
What an adventure
Persistent
Where do those images come from
Under the cover of my resting lids
There is a whole world within
Is any of it real
Or merely the winding down of
The cognitive day
And why the display?
Look for it,
Free your imagination
What do you see
As you respect
Fall fast asleep
First awake
tom tenbrunsel
Poet Laureate of Imagination
Author’s Note: How to look at your closed eyelids. Some call it looking into the “mind’s eye.” It’s like a Rorschach, a projective psychological technique.
Take a few moments. Get comfortable. Reclining in a quiet peaceful place undisturbed works best. Close your eyes. What do you see? After the initial negative of what you were looking at before you closed your eyes fades, “your mind’s eye” will begin to show you things as described above in the poem, “Eyelids.” The back of your eyelids become a palllet of shapes and things. It’s unlikely you will be able to read notes, texts, pictures, photos, etc. But with practice you can move thru scenes and themes. Yesterday I finished My Memoirs. Today when I close my eyelids, I see 8x10 pages and pages, at least 50 pages on a wall together. It looks like my memoir pages. I can even even scroll down and across them. Hallucinations? Naw, it’s the mind’s eye at work.
Try it! It’s fun. There’s a whole new dimension to explore with the mind’s eye. Enjoy your journey.
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