*photo by Brian and Laura Oh take me down
To the Sea of Galillee
Cleanse me
Wash me free
Of my iniquity
For from where I bedded
I woke up amidst a vision
As real as could be
I woke up overlooking
Sunrise over Galilee
My vision of an unearthed
Mount of the Sermon,
Me, Overlooking the Sea
The Sea of Galilee
I Was there to hear His echo
To hear His Word
To feast with the multitude gathered
Loaves and Fishes all around.
There
I was touched and freed
There
At the Sea of Galilee
A donkey’s ride away
From destiny
I was freed.
I walked down barefoot
Wadded into the water
And was purified
Blessed
My stress quieted
I tried walking on the water
As did Peter that day
But my faith escaped my
Imaginative hope
Prayer ensued
Hope and Prayer was my alternative.
Could the Spirit
Then
Possibly be the same
As is with me now?
Absolute!
Resolute!
As then
In that Holy Land
Could it be Mother Earth
Blessed by the birth child of Mother Mary
That watches over us eternally
Are we one with our Maker
One with our Savior
Trust
Faith
Hope
Pray
Spread the Word
Do unto others
Today.
Awakened from my ancient traveled dream
I ask,
No plead
Why then? Why not now?
When mere billions more people
Billions more evil surrounds us
Testing our very Faith
Now needed
Now to hear His word
Now even evermore
On earth
We need it more
Oh rising water of Noah
Cleanse us
Now as before
The Spirit truly abides
In those haunts of yore.
Oh Sea of Galilee
Lift me
Lift me up
Let me walk hand in hand
With He,
He Who set us free!
tom tenbrunsel
Carl Sandburg Writer 2023
4/18/2023
Inspired direct from the Holy Land while emailing Brian and Laura. Poem read aloud in the Garden of Gethsemane, in Jerusalem By Brian Tenbrunsel 4/23/2023, The tree in the background is over 2000 years old.
Aurthor’s Note: Is this religious? No. Is it Catholic? No. It is my belief system based on history and science, that there is a Maker in all this. Why does this story never wear out?There is a spiritual side of being human that cannot be set aside, if you struggle with it, pray. Carl Sandburg in his Pulitzer poetic frenzy arrived at the proof of Christ in his poem Silver Star,” in the poem, he ends with, “… And a baby there in swaddling clothes, on hay - Why does this story never wear out?”
Think about it. We are still in the time of Christ. In The year 2033 it will be 2000 years since the redeeming death of Christ. Two thousand years ago that day now in the near future. I hope I make it, Aunt Rose, I hope I make it, to celebrate this benchmark of our freedom from oblivion.
Some of my poems are inspired. Some a spirit moves my mind and hand. This poem came direct while in the middle of emailing my son and his wife about their current pilgrimage to the Holy Land. Cold chills moved me to speak my mind. In one of the photos Brian was standing ankle deep on a wooded platform in the actual Sea of Galilee. Hence the reference in the poem.
What an honor to have my poem read aloud in public where it all took place! Thank you, Brian (and for Laura filming it!”❤️❤️🙏