THE PERFECT STORM: A Trilogy of Poems
- tenbrunsel2
- Oct 31, 2024
- 4 min read
Updated: Nov 7, 2024

*downtown Marshall was the French Broad
DEDICATED TO THOSE WHO HELPED AND PRAYERS FOR RECOVERY
What impressed me personally during this disaster:
Rain poured soggy with mudslides, rivers and mountain streams raged, taking houses, whole businesses, violent winds
Bent and broke trees. Buildings and homes and people disappeared, but …
Neighbor helped neighbor
Every church became a volunteer aid station and without government assistance. Churches were our distribution centers of our disaster
Everyone with a truck, tractor, chainsaw joined in on the rescue
Hundreds of power line trucks came from 15 states and 🇨🇦 and stayed till the job was done
Water was shut off for 80K residents of Asheville - irresponsible city government!
Communications were disrupted and yet DukePower, government agencies and medical facilities told people to call or text or check portals when internet and cell were down- Duh!
One of the frustrations was lack of communication with friends and family and the outside world. I’m definitely switching to a satellite communication system.
Elon Musk donated Starlinks
Private helicopters flew rescue alongside chinooks to those trapped in the mountains
Helicopters geo-marked Buzzards for ground searchers
The total disaster area includrd a 100 mile radius.
More trees fell on roads and houses than any other disaster on record.
Swift water rescue volunteer teams patrolled raging rivers until run off by FEMA
FEMA is a four letter word.
It will take years to rebuild.
God be with us🙏🏻
THE MIRACLE OF THE CLEARING
Hurricane
Eye of the storm . . . . . Winds and torrential rain
Lights out . . . . . Communications nil
A million trees down in a . . . . . . 300 mile wide swath, 600 miles in length
In Western North Carolina
The evil Eye centered over Asheville
Isolated.
Darkness
Silence
Disaster.
What Luck!
But of all the luck
A gigantic oak . . . . . . Oh my, a huge one!!!!
Falls across our tiny 11 family cul-de-sac road
Totally blocking the entrance
No way to get in or out
Let’s get that tree removed
Says everyone . . . . but the unfortunate homeowner
“No don’t touch my tree” the homeowner says
Not by the hair of my skinny chin chin.
So we’re stuck
Cut off from in or out
Can’t get food or gas!
Or medical supplies for the special needs child
And the sick and elderly!
So after three miserable stuck days
A Stranger arrived out of nowhere
And proceeded
To cut and claw-removed the giant tree trunk
From blocking our road
And without so much as disturbing
The part of the tree on the dude’s house
Saint Stranger outta nowhere
A stern determined fella
Without hesitation
Went to right to work chainsawing
…..and clearing
Despite the owner’s vehement
Hysterical self-serving protestation
Quick as a flash
Fella removed the tree
In fifteen minutes
Our road was cleared
All debris nicely removed
Applause 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Then bowing on his trusty tractor steed
To the cheering clapping neighbors
He put a finger to his nose
And as quick as he had arrived
He and his trusty tractor vanished down the road
Sorta Saint Nick style.
What a wonderful gesture from the stranger
What a neighborly deed!
It’s what neighbors do indeed in America . . . .
Especially in the South🇺🇸
The owner still miffed
What a selfish . . . . foolish . . . . narcissistic fool!
He should be ashamed of himself.
Cleared! Ever bit of it magically vanished. Cleared.
Allowing access to supplies and medical needs
What a bold gracious stranger deed
To free people in need
A true American Hero
Thank you, Sir🇺🇸
A Narrative Poem brought to you by the Man on the Mountain, Roman Wolfe
HAIN’T NOBODY’S HERE!
Hain’t nobody here’s left
To weather the storm
No power, no water
Trees everwhere
They’s left fer parts unknown
Skidoodled.
These here mountains
Hain’t seen such devastation
Nor destruction
Hurricanes
Are for Seasiders
Not hearty mountaineers
Hurricane winds
Torrential rains/30 foot flooding
Rivers Raging out of banks
Trees on roads and houses - millions
One thousand mudslides, some two miles long in the mountains
Homes, businesses destroyed, wiped away
Families homeless
No power. No water. No communications for weeks
It was/is unexpected/awful
Worse storm disaster in this great country!
Us lucky
Neighbor helping neighbor
The wife and I
Decided to stay
Prepared for such doings
From yesterdays
Pray fer the lost souls🙏🏻
tom tenbrunsel
Poet Laureate of the Perfect Storm
Author’s Note: There are some questions that come to mind:
There’s always one fool in the storm. Be kind to him.
Where did the high pressure front to the west come from that guided the Storm due north? Unusual for the path of a Hurricane.
Was there a nuclear spill on the Nolichucky at Erwin?
Spruce Pine is the largest source of lithium, etc. in the world. Who would like to own it?
What effect will the new 100 year flood zone have on homes being rebuilt?
Is a mudslide worse than an avalanche?
Western North Carolina is the land of a thousand rivers. They were washed clean of natural fauna. Can that be replaced? Is the mud toxic?
How long does it take to replace millions of mature trees?
Add your question in the COMMENTS down below.
*This Trilogy is dedicated to coach Craig who lost 11 members of his family in a giant mudslide, including his parents. God bless you Craig🙏
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